The Cheshire Cat

Glorious work here. A very enjoyable bit of work. Just a few things to mention: A breeze played with the wispy mahogany strands of hair escaping around my face. I ...

Adorable and delightful. This is definitely going into my top favorites. The dialogue is very realistically written, something that can be immensely difficult. I'm heading straight to read the other ...

Hi there! So far, this story seems pretty interesting. I just jumped in here, but it's not too hard to figure out what is going on, which is nice. You ...

Wow! I am extremely impressed and enthralled. The story seems interesting, and the characters are easy to relate to. Their personalities are all nicely defined and easy to pick out. ...

This is one of the most amusing and entertaining scripts that I have ever read. While the disappearing toast and coffee pot flying through Death would be difficult to execute ...

Very nice! It feels very powerful, and I like many of the comparisons you use. I have one thing, however... Her eyes opened wide as she stared in awe. The ...

Wow Rachel! This is a truly powerful piece that I think has a lot of potential. From the sound of it, I think you will really enjoy delving deeper into ...

Ahhhhh! Beautiful! I love it! The imagery and word choice was so profound and strong. Amazing. There is very little I can critique one, just a few little typos... Wherer ...

Well, you certainly managed to get me hooked. I really love the idea you have here, and not only is it fun to read, but it also sounds fun to ...

I get the feeling that the 'suicide' was no suicide. Great job so far! I'm loving what I see! The forshadowing in this is great as well. I look forward ...

Howdy there Peanut! :D Well, here I am to review your story, like you asked. Let me start off by saying how awesome it is X3. You do a great ...

I love what you have so far. The topic of Death/Dying/or the Grim Reaper is my favorite to read or write. This prologue was expecially juicy. I saw a few ...

Excellent job! You played with the reader's emotions well and effectively painted a picture of a battle scene. I have a few little grammer mistakes however... It was the last ...

Nooooo!! Sage! DX You're doing a good job of making this play really good, yet really sad. I bet you're going to get some tears out of your audience if ...

Aww poor Mute. Blaine is a jerk. He's a great 'love-to-hate' character. I think that Prate is going to save the day; bust them all out somehow. That's my prediction... ...